Avatar AMV

I’ve been re-watching Avatar: The Last Airbender lately, and I decided to try something I’ve never done before. I made an AMV (anime music video).

The song is “Thrift Shop” by Macklemore. Language NSFW. Goofy, but I hope you like it!

FYI

Updates may be spotty for a while. Dealing with some personal stuff.

Crane Girl: Flying Higher

My novel-in-progress, The Crane Girl, is coming along nicely. I got 1,800 words in yesterday, which puts my first-draft-o-meter above 60,000 (or about 200 pages).

My process for this novel is different in a lot of ways.

For one thing, I’m reading the novel out loud to my wife as I go. As it’s only a first draft, this is a bit nerve-wracking, but it’s worked out well so far. She’s been noticing the kinds of character issues that are much easier to change early on, and I’m grateful for that.

Another strange thing is that the first draft is already “finished” – even though it’s only 60,000 words right now. That’s because I wrote the second half of the draft in a quick, abbreviated way, leaving out details and sometimes whole scenes. Now I’m going back and filling in the gaps – and making big changes too. So technically I’m on the revision phase now, but it still feels a lot like first draft writing.

Major changes I need to make:

  • Main character needs to be more proactive (and smarter)
  • Sidekick needs to have a more distinct personality
  • Villain needs to be more menacing
  • Latter half of the book needs more conflict

In other words, I need to take it up to eleven.

Still, it’s coming together nicely overall. I get a better vibe from this book than the last. Can’t wait to get it finished and send it out to some agents! I’ve already got a first draft of my query letter ready.

What are you working on these days? How’s it coming?

Friday Links

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This TED Talk debunks the pernicious idea that charities should maintain a low overhead ratio. He shows how “overhead” can actually help charities do more good for more people in the long run.

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Jean-Luc belts out the best music video you will see all week.

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So it turns out you can spy on a computer monitor by listening to it. It’s called Van Eck phreaking, and it’s cray cray.

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Want to lose a friend who’s a writer? Ask her, a month in, how it’s going. Better still, ask her to describe what she’s working on. She’ll try, because she has to (“Well, it’s about this friendship between these two, um, friends . . . ”) all the while listening to the magic leaking out of the balloon, and she’ll hate you for it.

-Mark Slouka, New York Times

Have an intrepid weekend, hypothetical reader!

Stillness of Morning

Postmortem: Stranger in a Strange Land

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Robert Heinlein’s Stranger in a Strange Land sits high in the pantheon of sci fi, on the same shelf as Asimov’s Foundation, Clarke’s 2001: A Space Odyssey, and Herbert’s Dune. The cover of my copy claims it’s “The Most Famous Science Fiction Novel Ever Written,” and while that’s certainly not true now (if it ever was), it’s in the top tier. So I went into this with pretty high expectations.

I got about 80 pages in and stopped reading.

The premise is intriguing enough: a human, raised by Martians, comes to Earth for the first time. He doesn’t speak the language, he knows nothing about our culture, he’s trying to understand humanity from the middle of a media circus. Good stuff, right?

The problem is that our Martian friend – Valentine Michael Smith – is just about the only likeable character in the story.

Everyone else is astonishingly flat. The men are all fast-talking world-wise know-it-alls who never hesitate or take a breath. And the women – good lord, Heinlein’s women could not possibly be more cookie-cutter gender-stereotyped than they are. They’re forever bursting into tears, saying irrational things that need to be corrected, and generally just being “women” instead of people.

It’s a shame, because I get the sense that there really is a good story hiding under all the wreckage. I found myself curious about Smith, what his Martian culture was like, and where his interactions with humanity were headed. But the curiosity just wasn’t strong enough to overcome my intense hatred of the other characters – of what you might call the character of the entire book.

Maybe it’s just a personal thing. Anybody else read this novel? What did you think? Did you make it farther than I did?

The Witching Hour by Brian D. Buckley

Fellow blogger and comrade-in-ink Dave Higgins was gracious enough to review The Witching Hour. See what he has to say!

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The Witching Hour by Brian D. BuckleyUnlike the compilers of some collections of poetry, who support their choices with an overarching theme or a long introduction explaining why these poems were gathered, Buckley is unafraid to choose poems on the simple rationale that he feels they are good. This produces a collection that is unashamed to admit that poets, like everyone else, are complex people who laugh and rage, cry and love.

This collection contains 25 poems chosen and revised by the author, spanning the last decade of his oeuvre. Although there is no single theme, Buckley has grouped them into three sections, Visions, lolz, and Searching, containing respectively uplifting, humorous, and speculative works.

The selection opens with Lift Off, a poem about rocketry. While it does contain some high-flown imagery, it is relatively simple, potentially tricking the reader into believing Buckley is a scientist who writes poetry. However, in the next…

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Final Fantasy Español

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I’ve been doing Rosetta Stone every day for about a month now. It’s still good, but sometimes you need a little variety, y’know? So I’m augmenting my español with a dose of Final Fantasy.

A fun fact about ROMs (computerized versions of classic games) is that they come in different languages. Sometimes you get the official translation, and sometimes you get fan work – which can be almost as good. Either way, you’re now the proud owner of an entire video game in the language you’re learning.

Video games are great for learning languages, for several reasons. First, it’s total immersion, so you’re forced to sink or swim right away. (A Spanish-English dictionary comes in handy here.) Second, you get a lot of visual feedback to help you figure out the words. And finally, the game is actually – you know – fun, so it gives you a good incentive to keep learning.

In general, you’ll want to stick to RPGs and other text-heavy games for this sort of thing. The Spanish version of Donkey Kong might be enjoyable, but I’m not sure how much vocabulary you’ll learn.

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Anyway, it’s been fun so far, although you do tend to pick up some unusual words. “Invocador” is “summoner,” for instance – I don’t think we got around to that one in high school. But you also get a lot of solid, basic vocabulary.

This particular game is especially tricky, because I’ve never played it in English. I’m really figuring it out as I go. I’m sure that I’m missing out on some of the finer points of the plot, and I occasionally find myself wondering where the hell to go next when it should probably be obvious. But overall, it’s not too hard to keep up with what’s going on.

What unusual methods have you tried to learn another language?

Bonus points to anyone who can tell me which Final Fantasy game this is!

Blog Returns Monday, January 6

Merry Christmas, everyone!

Friday Links

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My good friend and fellow author Ben Trube was kind enough to interview me about my book The Witching Hour. “If you were an N64 game, which game would you be?” A question we should all ask ourselves.

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A federal judge rules the NSA mass phone record collection program to be unconstitutional. Not the end of the story by any means, but a win we desperately needed.

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If you’re offended by religious irreverence or the F-bomb, don’t click this link. Personally, I laughed my ass off.

That’s a wrap, friends and neighbors. Have a great Christmas. See you when I see you!